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Post by thapunkpred15 on Feb 28, 2008 22:48:13 GMT -5
Warning: Story contains sexual and violent content
California, Los Angelos 1986
Not too long ago that explosion happened in Louisville Kentucky. Tradgic. Lives lost and only thing left is a couple of canisters. A truck rides down the empty street with a load of canisters in the back of the trunk. It was a pick up truck. The driver glanced in the rear view window to look behind his vehicle. Make sure the cans don't get lose. After 20 minutes the truck reaches its destination. It appears that it arrives at a medical company.
The guy drove the truck into the facility and stops as two guards come to inspect the load.
"Jesus christ whats in these things it smell so bad?" One guard asked holding his nose while he peaked through the covering of the objects.
The driver postions the glasses on his face and smirks." Its something from whats left of Kentucky bombshell. The Previous owners of those things gave you all full authority of them. They don't want them.Too much trouble so I heard."
"Oh really? They'll be trouble cause we'll have to load these things off the truck!" The guard said.
The two guards summon their strength to unload the shipment onto some rollers. Their dark blue uniforms made them look a bit like Area 51 guards. The two men didn't dare look at what was in the cases at all. They just did their job which was unloading. And into the Medic company of Sunrise they went.
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Sunrise Company.....
The two tanks were stored inside the medical lab. Its for study. The lab owner arrives in the room with papers in his hand review his last assignments.
"Ok. Looks like we have ourselves some fragile canister here." the guy said to himself.
The door behind him opens. Its his assitant. Mister Glenwood I presume.
"Good thing your with me." The lab owner puts his hands in his white lab coat." Can you move the Canisters to the freezing with the other cadavars."
Glenwood nodds his head and proceeds to move the objects to the freezer. He slowly pushes the canister into the freezing room. He softly contacts dead bodies that hung from the ceiling inside black bags. Condinsation floated from Glenwoods mouth as he chewed a piece of gum.
The first can is in. Now its the last can that'll probably be a *c'jit lou-dte kalei* to get inside.
He slowly slides the tank. He notices a small window at the top. Too bad he can't see whats inside since the cold tempature covered it up with ice.
*Fashoo!*
A small burst of air comes from the tanks side. Glenwood turns his head and slowly walks up to the canister.
"So old." Glenwood said as he took the piece of gum from his mouth. He's going to try and cover up the small hole with the gum.
He crouches and approaches the hole. The smell of the air hit his face. He reaches out to cover the hole but stops in a instant. He starts coughing. Its gas. Likely to be poisonous gas. The gas floats out of the freezer and throughout the whole facility without a care in the world. It roamed the company like a escaped convict but this Carbon Monoxide had the intent to kill the humans lungs right on the spot.
So sorry for those workers. They all died. It'll be a miracle if they came back to life now wouldn't it?
Chapter 2....Coming Soon!
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Post by spearheart on Feb 28, 2008 23:37:17 GMT -5
Wicked job man made me have he chills.
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Feb 28, 2008 23:40:12 GMT -5
haha. Actually this is one of my oldest stories. I started on this like last summer. I haven't finished it yet. So im just posting chapters that I've done already.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 1, 2008 0:13:42 GMT -5
So I like it when are you going to post chapter 2
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 2, 2008 0:13:51 GMT -5
California, Los Angelos 2007
The sky was light blue and sunny. Another day at school for your typical teens. Charles Mckire walked down the hallway with his bookbag. He was dressed in all black except for his belt. He had a black t-shirt with Black suspenders and of course his jeans were black. He stopped by his locker. He unloaded his notebooks and what not. He closed the locker.
Someone touches his shoulder as his back is turned. Charles barely gets startled and turns behind him.
Its Sonny "Striker" Paxton. The junior jock thats the quarterback of the football team. He liked to mess around with Charles cause he actaully though he was Emo.
"Whats up queer? Giving blowjobs to the principal?" Sonny smirked trying to crack a joke.
Charles looked up at him." Shut up. For your information im not emo." He said leaning againast the locker."Maybe if your mother taugtht you sense you wouldn't-"
Striker slams Charles towards the locker with rage and starts shouting." Don't get smart with me you litle sh*t!"
"Well you must be mad cause your girlfriend is a whore! Yeah I wouldn't doubt that I f*cked her in the back of the school earlier!" Charles sneers. He's getting p*ssed also but rather use words than fist.
The jock grunts and pushes Chucky towards the locker and walks away. Charlie regains his posture and takes a deep breath. Kids were looking at him like he was a outsider or a vistor from another world. Charlie walks down the hall walking past the crowds of teens.
What he did was stupid and he might get it worse for talking back Striker like that. Im sure Sonny and his boys will get Chuck back for disrespect but don't you respect someone to stand up for themselves if they treated badly?
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Joshua was in band practice. He sat in his chair looking at the board. Bored as all hell. His mind went blank. He isn't thinking about the music notes but somehow he is thinking about girls without a doubt. He taps his pens on his desk ignoring the teacher.
*Bell rings!*
Thats the siganl that class is over. Josh hops out of his seat as he put his hands in his black jacket pockets.He travels down the hall to see Charles coming past. He quickly reaches out and grabs Charles shoulder. He gets startled. Charles turns his head.
"Damn you scared the hell out of me. I thought you were Striker and his boys."Charles takes a deep breath." I was about to have it right here at this moment. I would been on this floor licking up scuff marks."
Josh raises his eyebrow." Why whats wrong with you?"
Charles leans his head to the right." Well Sonny was talking sh*t today. I had to tell him off. Now im thinking him and his boys are going to do something crazy. I wouldn't doubt."
Josh shakes his head." Well thats you not me. Who knows what they'll do. Throw you in the lake butt naked, beat the hell out of you ith studded belts or even-
Charles interrupts." I don't even wanna think about it. I had a hard time think about this f*cking math class."
Josh laughs.
"Ok man see you later...if im alive." Charles puts headphones in his ears and clips his ipod shuffle to his black jeans. He's listening to his favorite modern band which is AFI "Girls not Grey"
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Striker is in the locker room with his buddies. Weasel, Zachary and Chandler. Weasel was the sneaky skinny guy that played corner back. Zachary was the tough guy who played linebacker. Chandler was the clever but clumsy man who played wide reciever. Weasel lit a cigarette in the empty room.
"I heard you got told off by some somebody today. I thought you were all tough!" Weasel smiled.
"Shut up!" Striker shouted. He felt embarrassed he let someone disrespect him.
"Of course the word always spread throughout the school. Don't deny.Your getting weak now." Zachary announced.
"Yeah and I plan to do something worse." Striker leaned on the wall." You know Sunrise medical company?"
"Yeah what about it?"
"Well what we will do is capture him and his friends. Im sure they'll try to help him regardless. So we'll have to take them out also. We'll drop them off at the company. The place has been abandoned since 1986. We're gonna board the place up and leave them inside. Its a big place they'll be scatter out like rats in buffet kitchen."
"I kinda like this idea." Chandler said. "I'll bring my van and we can put them in there as we drive to the place."
"Of course just what I expect. It'll go out great and my girlfriend will get a kick out of this."
Weasel drops his cigarette and rubs it into the clean brown floor with his sneaker.
Its gonna come out well.
Chapter 3............Coming soon.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 2, 2008 1:04:35 GMT -5
I wanted to kick Striker's a$$. Great job dude I love it. When will chap 3 come?
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 3, 2008 23:52:52 GMT -5
Chapter 3
38.42.68.Ready.Hut!
The night was breezy and Charles was sitting in the bleachers with the other teens watching the home football team play. The jocks are too worried about this game. They won't have time to think about Charles will they? After all they are trailing 24-16 in the 4th quarter. Charles looked down into the crowd of players to see a bunch of dimwits chasing after a fumbled ball. He turns his head right to see Tina sitting with Josh. He sighs and walks out the stands.
"Im mind as well get a a** whooping in the parking lot." He turns head to see a mustangs parked in the lot. A guy is staring at him but he doesn't know who it is."Probably the look out guy to watch every move I make just so I won't leave school premises."
Charles clutches onto his suspenders and leans on a brick wall nearby. The smell of smoke is coming from the behind him. Chucky sniffs and turns his head. Oh sh*t. Its Weasel. Chuck takes off and Weasel takes off after him. He tackle Charles to the ground on the cold street and holds a towel with some kind of ethanol substance on it.
A purple van arrives at such a time. Its loading up the victim of the Jocks. Its appears that it is Zachary, Chandler and Striker.
"Were gonna wait. I know the rest of his friends are coming to see what happened. We'll take them too."
Zachary puts on a Jason mask. Weasel puts on a Michael Myers mask(From Halloween) and Chandler puts on a Leatherface mask( Texas Chainsaw massacre).
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The game isn't over yet and its getting kind of boring. Tina gets up and walks out of the bleachers. Josh stands up and looks her way. He's blocking someone elses view.
"Where are you going?" he shouted.
"You didn't see Charles?" She shouted back.
"Uh no. I didn't even see him anywhere this time of night."
"Im gonna look for him."
Tina walks off into the parking lot with her hands in her blue jeans. Josh follows. As soon as the reach the lot they both pause.
"Maybe walked home or something. I mean he looked tired of watching the game." Josh said.
"Well you can never be to sure." She gave a slight smile.
Out of no where a guy with a Leatherface mask pummels Josh to the ground. Another guy with a Jason mask bearhugs Tina and picks her up from of the ground. Josh wasn't gonna give in but he had too once the guy landed his hand on is nose he passed out. While Tina was struggling she saw another man approach her with a Michael myers face. The reached out his hand with a soaked towel and put it over her face.
She's out.
The three guys load the two victims into the van. The plan went just as they expected. Now the vehicle drives off. Sunrise medical company here we come.
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Inside the van...
The men remove their fake identities and smirk. Zachary bangs his hand on the floor smiling. Chandler is in the front seat driving. Lets hope he does crash the freaking van. Weasel stuffs his mouth with another cigarette.
"Just like we wanted it to go." Striker said in excitement staring at the three teens." All we gotta do is seperate these f*ckers inside the place. They can't ask for help or nothing. No contact with outside whatsoever."
"Yes sir." Weasel mumbled.
Chandler turns the radio on and surfs through the stations. Ah, here we are. "Highway to hell" by AC/ DC comes on.
I'm on the highway to hell Highway to hell I'm on the highway to hell Highway to hell
No stop signs, speedin' limit Nobody's gonna slow me down Like a wheel, gonna spin it Nobody's gonna mess me 'round Hey Satan! Paid my dues. Playin' in a rockin' band Hey Mama! Look at me I'm on my way to the promise land
Chapter 4...Coming soon
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Post by spearheart on Mar 3, 2008 23:56:34 GMT -5
HOLY PAUK I LOVE THIS STORY KEEP AT IT. ;D ;D ;D
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 4, 2008 17:10:30 GMT -5
I should make small books for myself cuz I really do enjoy reading my own work.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 4, 2008 17:19:38 GMT -5
Cool I like reading the ones I wright as well.Do you wright them in jernals?
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 4, 2008 21:32:15 GMT -5
Cool I like reading the ones I wright as well.Do you wright them in jernals? Nah I usually just write them on a piece of papaer and hide them in a notebook. Sometimes I'll just type a story and make it all up in my head without even writing it out.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 4, 2008 21:57:02 GMT -5
thats cool sometimes I do that as well.
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 4, 2008 22:14:51 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Lab 12B....
Josh woke up rubbing his head. He had a slight headache. It must've felt like someone banged his head on the wall several times. He rises off the dirty floor while leaning on a lab table to keep his balance. Dust blanketed old tools that laid on the floor and on operation tables. He finally stands up and walks toward the door. He turns the knob.
"Dammit its locked!" he whispered.
He couldn't open the door with no success at all. What to try the window? Sorry nno windows in this room.
He leans his head on the door and slides down it. He's thinking. He turns his head to see a lead pipe on the wall. A idea struck him. He quickly grabs the pipe and rushes back in front of the door. He violently swings and strikes the rusted doorknob.
*Bam, Bam!*
This time the pipe broke the knob. Once it broke Josh made his way into the hall. He wasn't too comfortable of the directions out of the compound nor did he know the way. He cautiously walked out with the pipe firmly in hand. Something catch his eye. Some figure is standing 7 yards in front of him. Its black but what can it be?
Its low moans couldn't be heard but its sure was creepy. Josh stares at the figue keeping a safe distance.
"What the hell are you?"
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Security room...
Charles already woke up. He was lying on the security desk gasping for air. It felt like someone absorbed his energy. He looked up at the small TV that played a small video over and over again. He staggered into the chair. It was uncomfortable but curiousity sturck him at the moment.
He pressed the buttons on the TV trying to keep the old film steady and more understandable to the eyes. He played it over and turned the volume up a little louder. To his eyes he saw a guy trying to unlock a door. In a instant over 20 fast moving bodies covered the guy. There were screams. This frighten Charles a little bit.
He stepped away from the desk and walked towards the door. He noncahalantly opens the door and walks out. That gruesome video is playing on his mind. What could it have been? He holds his head and looks down the hall to see dried up blood stains upon another door.
"Jesus chirst. This look like the place the video showed." Chuckie gulps. "Im screwed."
Despite his fear he takes off determined to find a way out.
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Main Lab....
Tina comes to and immediately begins to look around the room. The place had so much negative energy. Wouldn't she be scared? She finally comes acroos some kind of freezer. She doesn't want to open it but at the same time she wants to know what can be in there. Maybe a secret passage?
She pulls the freezers hinges and opens it. Wow no exit here. Just a bunch of frozen cadavars and a tank thats been busted open. The site made her want to vomit. She had to close the freezer.So she did. She walks out the room with no probelm with the door at all. Well she'll be in for a surprise.
While Tina was out of the main lab something bangs on the freezers door. Its give loud moans but it seems nobody can here it. Maybe its saying let me out or help me. Who knows?
But I think all hell will break loose after a while.
Chapter 5..Coming soon.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 4, 2008 23:05:19 GMT -5
Holy crap I think I would be keeping my lighter and police baton with me.LOL (I got the police baton from my mom) Great job punkpred. Man you know how to give someone the chills.
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 6, 2008 0:41:06 GMT -5
Chapter 5
Josh tightly clutched the rusted pipe. The black entity slowly walked towards him. The shadow loked creepy while the unknown moaned in a low voice.
"Don't come closer." Josh said with false courage." I'll beat you so bad you wish you weren't born."
The threat didn't stop the figure from trying to harm joshua. Closer it crept. Josh heart is racing. The figure lifted up its head and stared at the frighten teen. Oh f*ck. Its a zombie! Its skin was grayish brown. Its mouth hung open with skin rotting from its face.
Joshua stepped back and swung the pipe and struck the creature. The beast flew over into the wall and fell to the ground. Hard hitting. Due to recoil and the weapons bad condition it broke. He took off hoping the beast doesn't find him just incase it gets back up. He ran down the stairs and arrived in the cafeteria.
He shut the door closed and backed away from it. Something can come out at ant second so he had to take safety precautions. He turned his head he saw another entity walk out from behind the lunch counter. Dammit. Another one?
This figure stopped and stared at josh fro seconds. It moved its head left and right as if it was trying to make out something. It shouted.
"Josh? Charles?That you?" it said. It sound like a girl.
Under his breath he mumbled "Tina". He vaulted over a table and proceeded forward to the voice. Yes it was Tina.
"Im glad your here."He said catching his breath. "Can't find Charles no where. But I tell what we need to get out of here cause zombies are in here."
Tina looked a little scared." Zombies? Oh god."
"Yeah we will need god. Come on lets go.We can't stay here. I ran into one of those things back there and im sure its coming back."
Tina nodded her head and understood. After a second the two exited the cafeteria and went back into the hallway.
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Outside.....
The jocks were in the back of the van.Sonny was in the front with his girlfriend, Pamela having sex. Chandler laid his head on the floor while the other two were sitting around looking stupid. Weasel and Zachary had nothing to say.
"You think we'll let them out?" Chandler asked.
"Hell no. They can stay in there for years all I care." Zachary responded.
The orgasms of the girl were getting loud. It was irritating Chandler so he grabbed a small pillow and put it on his ears. I hope that'll start.
Zachary sighed. "Im gonna go take a p*ss. If Sonny asks where im am tell him im outside." Zachary said unhinging the back door of the van and walking out.
Weasel looked down at Chandler and smiled.
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Charles was still inside trying to be aware of his surroundings. His intentions of jumping out the window was growing. He felt like a rat in a cage with no way out. He paused and leaned on the wall to give it some thought. Nothing came to mind.
When he pulled up his head he heard heavy breathing coming from a nd nearby room. You think he's gonna investigate? Hell no! Charlie took off the other way. His heart was pounding out of his chest. He's sweating and his legs feel like jelly.
He ran up a staircase and saw a metal chair sitting in the hallway. A idea struck him at that moment. He ran towards the old piece of furniture. He carried towards a window. With all his strentgh he lifted up the chair. Ready?!
*Bam, Bang*
He slammed the chair into the window causing it to break. He threw the chair outside and peered out the window. Good enough. The window isn't that far from the ground. He carefully vaults out the window while hanging on to a brick to help him take his time getting to the surface so he wouldn't fall. His hands got dirty as small rocks pelted and grazed his palms. He made it out finally.
In his mind he wasn't thinking about his friends. In the back of his mind he thought better them than him since he had the intentions of helping them out. Too bad he can't get back in. He puts his wall onto the wall as his dirty black shirt rise against it.
He fell to the ground breathing hard. He had to calm down after being worked up over few minutes of being lost in darkness of a abandon place. You think thats all? Theres more. Alot more!
Chapter 6....Coming Soon!!
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Post by spearheart on Mar 6, 2008 1:02:09 GMT -5
wow creepy. RUN DUDE RUN...oh I'm yelling out inot space.LOL great stuff man.
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 6, 2008 1:38:34 GMT -5
Thanks again. I wonder no one else is reading it.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 6, 2008 18:19:41 GMT -5
Hmm don't know but I like it very much and want to read more
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Apr 6, 2008 1:10:54 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Charles rested his back upon the brick building. He rose up tired and anxious get away. He takes off like a cheetah after a zebra. He's half away to the exit of the compound and hears a noise. The sound of Liqiud splashing onto the ground. What the f*ck? Charles turns his head to see a guy bleeding the lizard in a huge bush in the corner.
The guy turned around and saw him. Oh look its Zachary.
"How did you get out you little f*cker?"
Charlie hunched his shoulders." I don't know. The same why you came out your mothers womb? How can she give birth to a baby boy with such a big head?" He smirked.
Zach gets mad and charges for him. Feeling disrespected with anger of a enraged lion.
*Crash*
The two teensagers pause. A human limb rose out of the ground quickly and rigorously. It was a arm. It seem that it had strentgh enough to burst through the concrete. There the limb moved around as it grayish green skin was flexing its broken index finger.
Charlie takes off. Zach proceeds to follow when he ran past the arm it grabbed his leg tightly. He's struggling to get away but the grip is too strong. The feeling of sharp unclipped finger nails dig into his skin letting blood gush out. Due to injury he falls to the ground wailing in pain.
It appears the limb starts to show more than what it represented. A head arose from the ground. The boy screams as he is ready to face the enevitable. The upper bodies other arm grabs the teens other leg. It pulls itself out the pit and lands on his back. Its teeth were missing and they had the color of dark yellow. Gross. Its opens it mouth and takes a bite out the back of the boys head. It unhinges his jaws from damaged brain tissue and howls like a wolf in the still night sky.
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Josh walks into a room and looks out the crack off a boarded window. He witnessed a boy getting devoured by some beastlike creature.
"Dammit."
Tina turns her head to get a glimpse of Joshua. "Whats wrong?"
"They're here."
"Whos here?"
"The living dead." He said walking past her. "We gotta make sure the entrance is locked becuase im sure they'll be practicing their multipication like rabbits."
Multiplication? Well which means there will be more like when two rabbits have sex.
Tina follows Joshua. They have to get to the entrance and lock it down for safty precautions. Better safe than sorry.
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Charles didn't look back his lungs were burning from the running. Oh wow transportation. He can get out now. He runs up to the passenger seat. He anxiously opens it. To his eyes he sees Sonny and his girlsfriend Pamela talking. Charlie froze.
"Oooo..Sorry." He mumbled.
*Bam!*
Sonny hits him with the door making him fall to the ground. Charles quickly wipes himself off and rises back to his feet.
"Listen something got your friend.You have to listen to me."
Chandler and Weasel jump out the van and come around the side. Damn.
"Look you aren't gonna listen to me just die here. I don't have to say nothing at all."
Sonny takes a look in his rear view mirror and sees a crowd of people running towards the van. What the hell?
"Who the f*ck are they?"
Charles turns his head once he got a glimpse of the hord of zombies he took off towards the nearest shelter. It appears Chandler and Weasel took off also followed by Sonny and his girl.
They immediately splitted in a party. Charles, Weasel, Pamela. Sonny and Chandler. The group of two ran towards the company as the group of three head into a extra factory nearby.
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Factory....
Charles peaked through the window. He saw thousands of walking corpses just moaning the word "Brains" over and over again.
"Aren't up sh*t creek without a paddle?!"
"No sh*t." Weasel responded.
Pamela sat on a box shaking in fear. Calm down don't get your panties in a knot! Gosh!
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Inside Sunrise company....
Sonny quickly slid a desk in front of the door. It might not be much but at least its something. Chandler takes a deep breath.
"What now?"
"Don't know. It'll be better if we had a goddamn phone to call police."
"The phones are dead." A voice called out. It was Josh. "I really don't know how you all got here."
"Millions of those...things or whatever chased inside."
Josh smirked. "Its gonna be hard."
"Of course." Chandler ended with a response.
Chapter 7...Coming Soon!
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Post by spearheart on Apr 6, 2008 1:15:21 GMT -5
holy pauking crap this is good and scary. I LOVE IT. 10/10 all the time. ;D
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