Dark Ookami
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You are such a curse|--|red
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Post by Dark Ookami on Nov 18, 2007 14:34:51 GMT -5
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Post by bloodedyautja on Nov 18, 2007 15:34:19 GMT -5
wow they're really good. absolutely love the first one.
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Post by Shagrath on Nov 18, 2007 21:27:13 GMT -5
Two things...
in the feature, could you get smaller resolutions?
and pretty good, I've seen that before. Avatar rite? I'd say just work on the head a little bit... your Azula (is that how you spell her name?) looks a little too happy... she dosnt ever look happy in the show...
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Dark Ookami
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Post by Dark Ookami on Nov 19, 2007 8:35:16 GMT -5
the second one isn't finished, i haven't had chance to finish the second one....lol.
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Post by Shagrath on Nov 19, 2007 14:47:42 GMT -5
was talking about the first one. the seccond one I see no problems with at all.
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Dark Ookami
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Post by Dark Ookami on Nov 19, 2007 17:20:06 GMT -5
when drawing i have a habit of changing a few things...for example...facial expressions...i've had that habit for a long time, it's abit like marmite, a person either likes it or doesn't...
i thought you were referring to the Drawing of Ty lee, about working on her head, lol...
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Post by Stone Heart on Nov 22, 2007 19:52:58 GMT -5
Looks okay, but a bit of a compression for the images is in order. With the first one, though, I just have to comment on the head. It looks a bit odd in the face.
(Edit: My post count! It's... It's... IT'S OVER TWO THOUSAND!!!! (Let's see how many people get that DBZ pun.)
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Post by Cyclone on Nov 23, 2007 1:29:36 GMT -5
I'll have to admit that I agree with StoneHeart. Something about Azula's face seems a bit odd, the general shape I think. Ty Lee looks perfect tho!!! What references were you using, like, were you drawing and watching, or did you do it in your head?
If its the latter, that's amazing den
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Post by Stone Heart on Nov 23, 2007 2:11:06 GMT -5
You know, I just realized what it was about the face that I wanted to point out. The right cheek (Left from our point of view) seems to be too far out, like it's swollen. That's the only major problem, as well as the chin. Looks a bit too jutted. I'd say just round it a bit, that'll fix it.
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Nov 24, 2007 1:27:41 GMT -5
Well I think its a good picture. It reminds me of Avatar the last windbender. Im not a fan of that show...I don't even watch it. LMAO!!
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Dark Ookami
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Post by Dark Ookami on Dec 12, 2007 14:43:01 GMT -5
You know, I just realized what it was about the face that I wanted to point out. The right cheek (Left from our point of view) seems to be too far out, like it's swollen. That's the only major problem, as well as the chin. Looks a bit too jutted. I'd say just round it a bit, that'll fix it. thanks for the advice guys...  i noticed that...i drew this last year when i was new to the whole body drawing...i haven't come back round to editing the face yet, but i have noticed it... what about the pose in general? |
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