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Post by Col. Kroenen (retired) on May 21, 2005 11:07:59 GMT -5
((This is a RPG concept from Redeemer and I. I'm sure we both hope this will start up a long RPG, like General's famous 'Irony' and 'War'. Only this time we can only hope that this one doesnt stop on the 9 page. Well, lets see what happens. Enjoy, and sorry for any grammar errors. And General, you HAVE to be in this one. Ha! We've forced you into it by adding you ourselfs. But if you really, for some reason, dont want to be in it, I wouldnt be able to edit it so you werent. So... If you decide you dont want to be in it, we'll have to delete this thread, and then call you a bastard . )) The year was 2892. The planet: Earth. The planet lays in ruin. This once magnificent planet now nothing more than a wasteland of both the skeletons of its once inhabitants, and toxins and sewage of the raging war that was the cause of all the destruction. But this war was not started by man. It was of another species. Another race far more superior then man in every way. They came with promises of peace, but all man received was their own fatal destruction. The creatures, the aliens, allowed this once beautiful planet to fester. But amongst all the Armies and resistances form to fight in the futile battle against these extraterrestrials, not all were actually fighting against them. Some helped them in the destruction of the planet. They hoped for world domination. But instead they got extermination. Colonel Kroenen used his intellect in technology to rebuild a time machine to get back to his own time. However there was a technical error in the transportation, sending him back to 2890, instead of 2005. So for two years he stayed on this ruined wasteland of a planet. Amongst the traitor armies that were fighting for the invaders was Fatal Alliance. Colonel Kroenen, being the top scientist, current General, and creator of the Fatal Alliance, was one of the few granted access on the alien’s vessel. Since the needed accessories to created another time machine were incapable of being found in the festering wasteland of a planet. So he stole the aliens technology in promises of a new weapon that would grant them unmatchable power. They were so easily fooled. For superior life forms, they were quite gullible. Right when his machine was reaching completion, he found an ancient scroll, hidden and locked up in a very secured area of the shuttle. Using his assassin and espionage skills, he easily stole the scroll and read it over. The scroll told tell of a great power. It was much like the Galaxy Stone he was after before, except it was tragically destroyed. I had a map, along with the direct location of the stone. This should be simple, he could just type the coordinates into the machine and teleport there. But one thing did puzzle him: if this object was so powerful, why haven’t these aliens searched for it? The answer laid in the map instructions. It was not time. Like the Galaxy stone, it only makes it presence every century or so. This is perfect him. The pre-destination set on his machine was back into the future, in the time of General Grievous. It seems during the same time the Sacred objects would appear on a planet by the name of “Ekabokia.” According to the scroll, there are nine different objects. Four are jewel-like crystals, two are golden bracelets, two golden eyes, and one golden necklace. Separately these sacred posse great power. The bracelets posse incredible strength, the eyes intelligence, and the crystals a mixture of both speed, and the power of regeneration. However if you obtain all four, together they will also greatly increase your strength aswell. The necklace will give the wearer the ability to drain the life and powers from weaker enemies by grabbing hold of them long enough. But when all these objects are bought together and the correct spell is chanted, these nine objects power will form into one object, granting all the individual powers, plus some. The alarms went off throughout the ship. He was caught. Hides the scroll in his jacket and makes his way to the time machine. The machine wasn’t completely finished, but it should still successfully send him to the his destination. The problem was that the destination was on General Grievous’ ship, the time right after he left in the time machine created it on it. So in General’s time, he would see Kroenen disappear through the time machine, and then sudden reappear seconds latter. As for the problem, he has the destination of General’s ship set exactly from memory. If he was off by even a little in time or destination, he could appear floating in space. Just then guards stormed in, aiming and ready to fire. So it was a risk he’ll just have to take. Steps into the time machine, just before the guards pulled the triggers. In a flash of light her vanishes, the machine guns of the guards missing him by less then a second and destroying the machine, disabling their chances of time travel. Back on the General’s ship, the Kroenen of the past just stepped into the time machine and vanished. Seconds later a rip in time sliced in the air. Gusts of wind blew through the room, hundreds of little sparks of electricity flying everywhere. The black latex-coved leg of Kroenen slowly steps out from the rip in time. Steps the rest of the way outside of it, the rip sealing back up behind him. Takes in deep breath, slowly cracking his neck and relaxing his shoulders. He wore his trademark uniform, same as the one the General has known him to wear. Bows his head down at the General, reaching into his jacket and pulling out the scroll he had stolen. “General,” he began as he handed the map to the General, “this scroll contains a map to some most interesting objects. They wont be there for long so we must take our leave to the planet Ekabokia, at once.”<br>
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Post by Col. Kroenen (retired) on May 21, 2005 11:20:30 GMT -5
((Also, I (now) know that Star Wars was set in the past, while this RPG seems to indicate it was set in the future. So what, just bend the rules a little, damn!))
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Post by DachandesHonor on May 22, 2005 15:10:35 GMT -5
The breath of General Grievous rattled underneath the dread mask he wore to sustain his very life. His tall skeletal, mechanical body was framed by the inky black oblivion of space, his white cloak held behind him by the crossing of his arms.
His vibrant yellow eyes shone malevolently beneath the mask, like a grinning crocodile, ready to lunge for the kill. The wrinkled reptillian skin beneath the mask stretched every now and then as the General blinked, hiding the venomous eyes. His robotic body made a slight whirring sound as he moved, the gears hissing together.
He clasped his hands behind his back, turning away from the veiwport, the red underlining of his cloak rippling as he moved. It had been quite a shock to him when Kroenen arrived once more, traveling through time. It was not a large surprise though, the Cololonel had achieved such victorious feats before. Why he never went back and just conquered civilizations from the start he did not know, but then again time was something he did not fully understand, nor care about.
"Status." Grievous hissed, his accent filled voice rattling softly.
"The rift is still open and fully operational, sir." The droid responded in its nasal, mechanical voice, metallic fingers clicking away at it's computer.
"Good." He responded, in his typical hunched over frame. Taking a few steps forward on his tridactyl feet, he was followed closely by two of his robotic Magnaguards.
"General!" One of the droids yelled from at his station, his vocal receptors at a whinig high.
"What is it?" Grievous demanded, walking over the the station, leaning over the droid.
"We're detecting fire from the other side of the rift, General, Kroenen may be in danger." The droid responded, tapping his finger on the data screen.
"I highly doubt the Colonel is in any form of danger....however, this does prove a problem." He stated thoughtfully, one robotic hand on the bottom of is mask. He began to head for the portal, then halted as a soft hiss buzzed from it. He watched as the events unfolded, Kroenen coming out just as he entered. Time travel would give the greatest of Warlords a migrane.
"Good to see your safe return." Grievous stated, lowering his head slightly in a small bow. He accepted the scroll, looking over it with vague interest. "Good. Very very Good."
(sorry for the not so good post, I wasn't really sure what to write...)
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Post by Kane935 on May 22, 2005 19:20:29 GMT -5
( You guys, could I join this RPG please? As Durge, the Gen'Dai bounty hunter, a commander of the sepratist army? But in this mission, he joins with General Grievous please?)
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Post by Kane935 on May 23, 2005 16:29:01 GMT -5
Durge was asleep, sleeping like a baby, but that was not going to last long. The alarm of his ship, a Geonosian sail ship, went off with a loud, ear piercing noise. Durge raised his head in suprise, and looked at the multiple control consoles around him, looking for the deactivation button, being really agrovated. Durge saw it quickly, and slammed the console, deactivating it in an instant. Durge got out of his chair, and went to his armory. Durge checked his weaponry, and activated all of them. Durge then acitvated a coffin like object. Durge then put the coffin on a holo pad, and took it out of his ship. Durge then went back inside his ship, and acitvated his console. Durge then pressed a few buttons, then walked out of his ship, and his ship deactivated in an instant. Durge went back to the holopad, and walked towards a lift. The door of the lift opened, and there were two Magnaguards inside.
The two Magnaguards were his bodyguards, a gift from General Grievous. Durge walked into the lift with the coffin, then pressed some buttons, and the door closed. Durge pressed some more buttons, and the lift burst into life, and the lift went up at an incredible speed. In 10 seconds, the lift stopped, and the door opened. Durge walked out with his coffin and the two Magnaguards followed Durge down a small corridor, then they reached a metallic door. Durge pressed some buttons, and the door opened. The two Magnaguards went to the left, to a small control room, and the two Magnagurads went to some consoles. Durge went ford, then stopped in the middle of the circular room. Durge looked around, then pressed a button on the coffin, and the window opened. Durge took out the person in there, and layed the person on the ground. They were in the training room.
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Post by Kane935 on May 23, 2005 16:59:02 GMT -5
The bodyguards take away the coffin for being recycled, then walk back to there consoles. Durge looked at the person lying on the floor. He was a brown-haired jedi. " Wake him" said Durge " Yes, commander." said one of the magnaguards One of the magnaguards pressed a button, then in an instant, the jedi woke up. The Jedi lept up, and activated his blue lightsaber. Durge laughed at the foolish jedi. The jedi charged at Durge, but Durge kept laughing, the Durge activated his energy shields, and put his arms in an X formation. The jedi kept charging, and was about to strike with his lightsaber, but Durge hit the jedi with his energy sheilds on his arms, sending the jedi flying across the room, and hit the floor in a sudden strike.
Durge laughed at the jedi for his foolish strikes. Durge let the jedi stand to his feet. The jedi drawed his lightsaber once again, but this time, Durge had a suprise for him. Durge deactivated his energy sheilds, and drew a lightsaber from his back. A green shining blade extended from the handgrip. The jedi charged, and Durge did also, going incredibly fast for his size and tallness. The jedi striked, and Durge met all of the jedi's moves. Durge met all of the jedi's moves slowly at first, but got gradualy faster and faster and faster until Durge striked very fast, and forced the jedi to let go of his lightsaber. Durge took the jedi's lightsaber, and deactivated the light blade, then deactivated his own green bladed lightsaber. Durge put both of the lightsabers away, then punched and kicked the jedi multiple times at an incredible speed. The jedi was so suprised, he fell to the ground. Durge's Magnaguards ran to the jedi, and picked him up. " Were leaving. Were going to the bridge, were General Grievous is waiting. Lets go!" yelled Durge.
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 23, 2005 18:10:33 GMT -5
ooc: I'm gonna go ahead and join, if I'm not suppose to be sure to let me know. I'm going to join as a jedi knight named Askim Tehi.
Askim sat inside one of the ship cells. He slowly came to conciousness as he stared with his blurred vision. "Oh you're finally awake, guess we'll have to fix that then. Maybe Durge can use you for another training dummy." A voice said. Askim's vision cleared up and he saw a middle aged man staring at him with a grin. "You think this cell can really hold me?" The man laughed in reply before saying, "The bars are made up with the same technology as your light sabers, you're dead when you try to cross, if you can since your hands are bound as well." Askim looked to his sides. His hands were positioned in a Y shape while eh was on his knees. He grinned and then replied, "You forgot something." "And what was that?" The guard said laughing once more. Instead of replying, Askim suddenly clenched his fist. You could vividly see the guard clench his throat and his face began to turn blue, then purple. Watching him go unconcious he let up, and put his hand on the scanner near his cell. The bars disapeared, and the bindings around his arms let go. Standing up Askim rubbed his arms after he let go of the guard through force, and walked to out of the room, since only a fool would leave the convict weapons inside their cell room. As Askim rounded the corner, he saw a large trophy case full of light sabers, with names underneath each one. He looked at the newest addition, his. Using the force to break them out, Askim began to walk down to the docking bay to look for a ship.
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Post by The General on May 23, 2005 20:21:52 GMT -5
(sorry about the change, I was having problems with the old account and it had to be deleted, heres the new one, perfect reincarnation of the old, no?)
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 23, 2005 20:25:30 GMT -5
ooc:yep.
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Post by The General on May 23, 2005 20:30:26 GMT -5
(Now, for my post.)
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 23, 2005 20:33:34 GMT -5
ooc: Alright, let's go
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Post by The General on May 23, 2005 20:58:24 GMT -5
"Set these coordinates into the computer." Grievous rasped, handing one of the droids the scroll. He turned away from the other droids, his talons clicking against the metal floor. He gestured Kroenen to follow him as he began to exit.
Suddenly the high warning shrill of a station droid caught his attention. "Sir," It whined out. "It appears one of the captive Jedi has managed to escape his cell!"
The reptile-like eyes narrowed. "Where?" He demanded venomously.
"Detention Cell block, 1A." It replied, fingers flying over its keyboard.
Without a word Grievous turned, his cloak billowing behind him like a living animal. His steps were filled with grave intent as he strode at a hurrying pace, ignoring those he passed, not bothering to glance at those he barreled to the floor. Jedi, He sneered in his thoughts. Loathesome vermin. As he walked, the dim hallway lights reflecting over his metal surface, one of his arms reached into one of the pockets located in his cloak.
Gripping two sabers, he placed one in the other hand, preparing himself for the coming destruction that was soon to follow as soon as the Jedi was located. He had most likely retrieved his saber from Grievous's case, which had been newly furnished and was ready to be placed back into his quarters. After this, he would most likely repeat the process.
He rounded the corner, heading for the docking bays, and stopped directly in the path of the Jedi, some 30 feet away from him. Instantly the bio electric scanners in his eyes began to look over the Jedi, judging him instantly. His style would be revieled when the actual battle began. "So, Jedi, leaving so soon?" Grievous rasped, igniting the blue and green blades. "A pity you'll never make it out."
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 23, 2005 22:32:04 GMT -5
Askim narrowed his eyes. Igniting his double blue light sabers, he replied, "Don't be so sure." Suddenly he slashed his light sabers in a downward motion, "HUAAAA!" He yelled. Suddenly with his force powers the steel on the floor in front of him moved so there was a large lump or fold, which suddenly shot forward. Askim quickly shot to his left, using his force powers to block out paths. Not that they would hold them long at all however. He didn't both looking behind him to see if they were following, his only focus was the hangar ahead.
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Post by Kane935 on May 24, 2005 0:18:05 GMT -5
When the Durge and his retinue were about to head to the bridge, alarms went all over the ship. Durge looked around the room. An audio message played immediately. It said: " A prisoner had escaped from the prison area!" the same message played over and over again. With an instant, Durge thought only one word. Jedi! Durge ran towards a console, pressed multiple buttons, then a door opened on the ceiling. Durge activated his rocket pack, and flew out of the hatch, and into space. The hatch closed in an instant. Durge changed direction, and flew towards the hanger bay of the Invisible Hand II. Durge increased the speed of his rocket pack to an incredible speed. In about 10 seconds, he was at the hangar bay doors. Durge flew to a small console, then pressed a button, deactivating the hangar shields for a few seconds. Durge flew into the hangar bay, and the sheilds went back up in an instant. Durge landed on the ground, then saw the jedi knight running. A fool, he thought. Durge went to a console next to the hangar sheilds, and pressed three symbols symiltaenious, activating a huge door that closed the entire hangar sheilds, protecting the ship from intruders. Both hanger shields were closed, meaning the jedi could not escape. Durge readied himself in a defensive stance, ready to await for the jedi to make a kill.
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 24, 2005 8:40:29 GMT -5
Askim narrowed his eyes, and used the force to close the passage behind him. "I don't have time for this!" He yelled, suddenly shooting forward with amazing speed with a boost from the force. Askim slashed several times with both light sabers in all directions.
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Post by Col. Kroenen (retired) on May 24, 2005 8:59:17 GMT -5
Marvels at the amazing computer station, slowly making his way up next to the General. Proceeds to follow the General, stopping as he does when he hears that high shrill of the droids warning. Stares over at small mechanical droid, cocking his head slightly to the side. Crosses his arms behind his back and under the long, dark, shiny leather trench coat that covered a good percentage of his figure.
Stands still for a moment, starring over at the droid for a few seconds more. Turns in the direction of General, following him slowly, still keeping his arms crossed behind his back. He felt it kept him upright better. His long trench coat swayed when he walked, as if trying to mimic General’s white cloak. Doesn’t even bother catching up or matching the General’s quickening pace. Takes his time in admiring the surroundings of barreled creatures and others he passed. The lights of the hallway passing over and reflecting off his shiny black gasmask-like helmet, almost as though it was mirror polished.
Makes his way around the and following General slowly and calmly from far behind. Approaches the docking bay right in time to witness the buzzing sounds of General’s igniting swords. Looks over at the jedi, then back to the General. Steps to the side a little to give him room to prepare his strike without any interference. Waits for the two to engage in battle, being the spectator of the fight.
Watches the jedi’s blue double light saber ignite up, staring back over at General and waits for him to make his move. I was certain the General wouldn’t need his help, but still he started to relax his shoulders and crack his neck a bit, twisting the key to his heart, even though it automatically does that itself. Its just become a small habit of his. Keeps his hands holstered above the handles of his stealth blades, in preparation of an attack, just incase. Looks up and follows the rising lump of steel that seems to be trying to trap them in. Perhaps he was being paranoid, but he thought it was going to try to swallow them into the floor or something, so his instinct took over. Immediately draws his blades out of they’re stealth’s on his hips, twirling them around and slicing continuously at the rising lump of steel that seemed to be trying to seal them in and prevent them from following. Almost as soon as it stopped growing, multiple large chunks drop down from the middle, make a doorway of sort. Stealth’s his blades and steps out, looking over at the fleeing jedi.
Chases him the moment he sees’em, the General following quickly behind. Withdraws his Luger* from its holster, firing two shots at the fleeing prey. One bullet zooms past his right shoulder, scraping it a bit. Fires twice more but misses by less then a inch each time. Aims in for headshot, but right before he could pull the trigger, his foot stumbled. Instead of falling over, he placed his hands on the ground at just the right moment to perform a flip. Fires once more while in the middle of the flip, not a accurate aim but still a aim nevertheless. The bullet enters him, but not where he had intended. He had hoped to get him in the back of the head, or perhaps in the back, but instead he got him in the left leg. The bullet passed right through, just inches below the kneecap, causing the jedi to stumble down to the floor. Obviously it was the first time he’s been shot by a bullet instead of some laser. Holsters his gun, watching the General pass by, making his way over toward the wounded jedi. Not fatally wounded but still wounded nevertheless.
OOC: I read up on some Kroenen comic info. Turns out that in the comics, he’s… cybernetic. A robot. And he’s very polite, caring and sweet… to his friends and team members anyway. But polite to everyone. Also he is fully capable of speech. Of course, because he’s a robot in the comics. I want to note that I play the FILM Kroenen, I kinda hate the Comic Kroenen. The movie made a much better version of him, IMO. And sorry if I took the “growing lump” of steel from the floor the wrong way. Was it meant to try to seal us up or something? Whatever, if not, make way with my post. And sorry for the delay, I kept falling asleep at the keyboard. Sorry for any typos or if anything seemed like God modding. I cant see how though, since I only wounded the jedi. And General certainly isnt going to kill him. Or try, and he somehow escpaes. Trust me, no one dies this soon in a RPG. Unless they're your self-created characters to fight. Like the guards. I'm going to go pass out now. Bug bye. *Luger: A German semiautomatic pistol introduced before World War I and widely used by German troops in World War II.
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Post by Col. Kroenen (retired) on May 25, 2005 10:36:42 GMT -5
OOC: It should, if you had blocked it. But you were running away, and I nicked your shoulder and hit your leg, no where near your light saber. If you had turned and blocked the bullets with the saber, General would take this to his advantage and take you down. So really, I did you a favor. You’re welcome. Also lets not mention that you were laying wounded on the floor, and all of sudden you’re standing and turning around? You didn’t post a “getting up” message.
Quickly withdraws his gun from its holster again, aiming in for a kill. Right before he got to pull the trigger, his attention was almost immediately turned to the frights that were being “pulled” in, heading toward them, his head turning over to them and watching as they approached. Turns his attention and head back at the jedi, right in time to witness him leaping down. Pulls the trigger in the gun, missing him by a hair. Holsters his go again, looking back up at the incoming fighters. Quickly turns the wall, running towards it. Jumps and plants his foot, moving quickly so its as though he’s actually walking on the wall. Turns sharply, running on the other side of the fighter that slide in under him, currently blocking off the pass for anyone on the floor. Leads off the wall when he gets to the other side, spinning vertically for a moment, landing on his hands, then turning over back on his feet. Runs forward and steps when the wall disappears, and he can see down the ledge that the jedi leaped down, and the shuttle that he hijacked. He couldn’t catch him now, but that doesn’t mean he couldn’t catch him later in the future. No jedi, no… no PRISIONER, shall ever escape and live long enough to tell about it. That’s how it was with him and the concentration camp he was put in charge of long, long ago. And he was sure that the General would have it no other way. Quickly reaches into his trench coat, taking out a small little electronic. It looked somewhat like a spider. It was small enough to easily fit in your palm, the body was tiny, round and circler. On each side of it was two long, sharp like legs, which did somewhat give it the shape of a spider, only with four sharp legs. Throws the “Bug,” or as he, the creator, originally named it, “Spyder,” at the hijack shipped before it could leave. Long, talon sharp legs sprang open in mid-air, landing on the back of the ship. The legs clamped down hard and locked onto the ship. The Spyder was created mainly for spying in on enemy plans and research, but it also had a tracker set onto it for these types of emergencies. The tracker also cant be traced, which does help in this situation, but in others it did. A small little light started to flicker on-and-off on the bug, telling that is activated and working. Watches as the Jedi flies off in his stolen craft, reaching into his trench coat again and pulling out a small little box that indicated the bugs location and position. All he had to do now is attach this to the General’s computer, and it should better tell them its location of the Jedi and his stolen craft.
OOC: The fighters are ships, right? Tri-Fighters for example? Because I’m taking it that they’re the ships. And when you fired off those missiles, were you still inside the ship or outside it?
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Post by econdha on May 25, 2005 12:24:37 GMT -5
Wow, fun. Very well done, guys. Can't wait to read the rest.
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Post by Kane935 on May 25, 2005 15:31:38 GMT -5
Durge burst out of the rail prison he was placed in. Durge bellowed at what happened. Now he hated jedi more than ever! Durge's Magnaguards came to him, and help pull him up. Durge then went to the bridge of the Invisible Hand II. Durge ran through the ship's corridors with his entourage. Durge ran through a large corridor, and then stopped running, and walked past the corridor with multiple escape pods. Durge walked through the bridge door, and he was there. The bridge crew comprised of Nemodians, and droids, all working on the consoles and going forth there own buisness. Durge walked to the front of the bridge, looking out the observation window. " Commander, launch all droid fighters, and intercept the escaping fighter. Lock on all weapons on the escaping ship. Do not stop the interception until the ship is either captured or destroyed!" said Durge " Yes, general" said the Nemodian Commander " Also, commander, are there any ships approaching the Invisible Hand II?" asked Durge " Yes, general, there is one ship heading towards the docking bay. It's weapon systems are offline, and they are not stopping" said the Nemodian Commander " Let me guess, the passangers are Sith?" asked Durge " Yes, General" said the Nemodian Commander " Good. Target the escaping ship with all quad turbolaser turrets, dual laser cannons, ion cannons, point defense ion cannons, and proton torpedo tubes. Fire at my command." said Durge A few seconds went by, then he said it. " Fire!" said Durge
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 25, 2005 18:41:06 GMT -5
Askim Tehi looked faintly around the corner. Seeing the stoves used to cook the meals, Askim quickly turned on the each stoved, then the used the force to rip apart the gas tubes. After a few minutes of waiting, the guards began to get close when Askim suddenly used the force to hold onto one of the guards, then had him point the gun at the stoves? "What are you doing?" "I can't help it!" He yelled, just as he was forced to pulled the trigger. The gas in the air immediatly caught fire and exploded, leaving a blaze inside the area.
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