Razornail
Unblooded
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams, the smell of farewell and gasoline.|--|Green
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Post by Razornail on Mar 1, 2008 17:11:59 GMT -5
I wanted to share some of my poetry with all of you. Although this section doesn't say anything about allowing something more or less than stories. But I have a poem to share that is like a story. And it was one of the worst nightmares I had.
Poem: Nightmare..
Family cheer. Unseen seer. All must be at peace. But none shall know the deceased.
In all knowledge, I now see. In sharp turns, I must breathe. In the horror I only sense. Only I became tense.
I cry, I plead. No one understands why I want to leave. They hold, they soothe. They don't let me move.
The darkness pass through me. But now I see. Many will turn to death. Only I can let out a breath.
They fool, they play. Don't know their dismay. Only I stand around. The spirits awaken from the ground.
The gentle day. I no longer say. They will die. The flame will pass by.
Slumber claimed me too short. Spirits protect me from the decision of the court. I awake. Just to the mistake.
No sound. No one around. No light. Only the glow from the night.
Burnt floors and dark dots hurt my eyes as I wept. Feeling alone, I lost all that I kept. The spirits and the flame caught all. Yelling out and screaming into the halls.
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Well, I hope you guys like it... it's one of my favorite poems, even if the last part haunts me for days on end. If you would like a more, descriptive meaning on what every four sentences mean, ask me and I will post it afterwards.
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Post by thapunkpred15 on Mar 1, 2008 23:24:21 GMT -5
Yeah it was good. Makes senses to me.
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Post by spearheart on Mar 1, 2008 23:28:35 GMT -5
I love it. Can you wright more I'm a sucker for poetry. I wsh I could wright it.
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Razornail
Unblooded
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams, the smell of farewell and gasoline.|--|Green
Posts: 33
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Post by Razornail on Mar 2, 2008 0:57:56 GMT -5
More and future poetry will be written and saved on my Deviantart account. My name is BloodNightmare and feel free to add me as your friend or even watch me.
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