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Post by Cyclone on Oct 18, 2006 20:22:52 GMT -5
Here is some of my haiku, please correct me if the syllables are wrong, and for those new to haiku, it is a Japanese style of poetry, almost always about nature, with the following syllable template: 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables Onto the poems!
Snowfall Cold is in the air, Snow falls slowly to the ground, Sadness and happiness.
Yeah, I know that's not that meaningful, just plain and simple This one is a bit more complex, dedicated to my new girlfriend
Pretty Woman Oh when I saw her, I saw a light within her, She is full of beauty.
here are just some misc ones,
Falling stars Watching in the night. Listen!The silence is gone, the stars are racing.
Midnight Sonata As we are dancing, the water flows through the stream, love is in the air.
Yes, I know these aren't that deep,But I didn't spend too much time on them, as I have said in another thread, I suck at poetry.
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Post by Frost on Oct 18, 2006 20:34:27 GMT -5
They're not bad at all. Simple yet beautiful. I really liked Falling Stars. it reminds me of the last meteor shower I witnessed. hehe, I also find that I could relate to the Snofall one. It rarely snows out here in Laredo. The last time it snowed was a couple of years ago, and the last time it snowed before that one snowy christmas eve was over thirty years before. anyways, enough of my digressing, all your poems are nice.
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Post by Cyclone on Oct 21, 2006 8:57:46 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm am right now working on more haiku, and will post it later. Also nice to see you can relate to some of my haiku.
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Post by Frost on Oct 23, 2006 22:25:48 GMT -5
you're welcome. its nice to read good poetry. I'll be keeping an eye out for the new ones.
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Post by Stone Heart on Oct 23, 2006 23:55:53 GMT -5
Not bad dude, not bad. Although, I have always thought haiku was the STRANGEST form of poetry ever known to man.
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