Some of my newer poetry

[Frost]

I wrote these ones a while back. As some of you may see, there has been a slight change in the type of poetry I've written this time. I hope you like them.


Silent Knight

Long ago in this global light
I found the strength to fight.
For too long this orbs of mine wept
For your dark memory I kept.

Under your cold face
I found a trace
Of devine grace,
Which by the end,
You can't defend.

I can now see through.
I believe in what I see in you.
Behind those deep blue windows...
Beyond those deep ocean shadows...
There is a spark of hope.

Rough thorns you expose
To conceal within your soft rose.
Fool everyone you might,
but to me you will alway be my silent knight


here is another one.



Lonesome Dove

Lonesome dove in the sky
With my heart you fly.
Where is it you go?
Don’t let me die inside.
Come back home
By my side.
And gone our solitude,
We’ll be free,
Just you and me.

[Cyclone]

Wow, those are really nice, I suck at poems, except haikus of course, I rock at haikus, not to steal the spotlight from you though. I however, espacially suck at rhyming, and not only are your poems good, but they rhyme! it kicks my sorry poems into a gram of dust...I like the lonesome dove the best, it seems sweet, and simple.

[Frost]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. hehe, I wrote that one out of boredom one day before class started.

You write haikus? I'd love to read one.

[the lonely soldier 714]

not bad poems some of mine suck, some good. i guess the one that suck was my poem called little daisy or something like that, i couldn't tell ya. lost the poem.

[Frost]

I see...

why do you think so? All poetry is simply an expersion of the writer's soul. well at least that is what I think. If you ever find your poem, can I read it? I love to read. ^_^