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Post by Frost on Mar 19, 2005 19:59:45 GMT -5
I close my eyes...
I close my eyes... And I see it. Its no surprise.
Its frail hands... Are like cold ice And hot desert sands
It has a piercing gaze; Sharp and penetrating And yet it has grace.
Its calling me... I can hear it. It is all around me.
Its black sheet That envelopes me No one can defeat.
It is all closing in. It has me; The pain has struck in.
I can't help it He is here He's not claimed it.
His is my life; My soul. I've met my death.
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Post by Masurao on Mar 19, 2005 20:03:27 GMT -5
*Claps* Very well done! Nice job!
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Post by Frost on Mar 19, 2005 20:07:31 GMT -5
Thanks. here is another one. The truth... The truth Is one's life Eerily silent Yet loud The proof Is this Vibe. Awkwardly vibrant yet sound. It burns horribly; This harsh nasty pain. Frozen. It turns Silently. Colorful not vain Got life?
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Post by Kira on Apr 16, 2005 11:40:12 GMT -5
Beautifull Sora!!!
*claps*
Wonderfull !!!
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Post by Frost on Apr 18, 2005 9:52:46 GMT -5
Thankyou.
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Post by Kira on Apr 18, 2005 10:36:10 GMT -5
Hehe.....you're welcome.......I like 'the Truth'......it's very true....
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Post by Frost on Apr 19, 2005 16:15:48 GMT -5
Thanks. hehe, I try to write poetry on my observations in my life around me.
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Post by Kane935 on Apr 19, 2005 18:07:35 GMT -5
Very positive thinking Kuriokappa. I am proud of you.
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Post by DachandesHonor on Apr 19, 2005 23:30:17 GMT -5
Nice poems.
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Post by Frost on May 22, 2005 17:42:19 GMT -5
Domo arigato gozaimasu
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Post by Kane935 on May 22, 2005 19:35:50 GMT -5
What does mean? It doesn't matter, for your poems are awesome!
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Post by SwiftBlade on May 22, 2005 19:37:10 GMT -5
impressive, extremely impressive my friend.
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Post by Kane935 on May 22, 2005 23:28:23 GMT -5
Yeah, It could be turned into music, and I did it. Very good, your poetry is.
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Post by Frost on May 23, 2005 22:36:40 GMT -5
Muchas gracias. (it means thankyou very much)
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