Post by Cheshire cat on Mar 15, 2005 8:16:26 GMT -5
If it sucks i don't care i'm planning to redo it a little anyway. It's called ravencraft and or/Blackstone and it's the prolog.
Prolog:
Raven clan tower, a large black tower in the center of the raven clan territory. Many live around it and are completely safe to the Cobra clan, But not for long.
Talon IV.
"Um, commander?" Said the System operator on the Talon IV,
"What is it?" Said the Commander,
"We have a signal coming from the Cobra clan, they appear to be attacking."
"Can we stop them? How many are there?"
"Only 2" Said the system operator, "Oh no,"
"What now?"
"There are too many of them. Send for the fleet!"
"What’s the count?"
"60 and counting! 70, 80!"
"I am sending for the Fleet. Pull back now!" Said the commander as she taps a few buttons on her black keyboard.
Raven clan tower.
The commander rushing up the stairs finds the lord of raven sitting at his throne looking at his kingdom being destroyed.
"My liege, I have come to tell you that they have fended off the Cobra clan for now." Said the commander,
"Good" Said the Lord,
"This cannot continue. That clan has been at war with us for a very long time. Only just recently they made a truce. Although judging what just happened I suppose they are not trust worthy at all."
"Maybe we can make a pact." Said the commander,
"WHAT? Are you insane?"
"Insane is a relative word your majesty."
"True, true. But make a pact with the people who have killed our people for such a long time just because they want more land?"
"Completely destroying them would go against our law, if we made a pact, they would be breaking they're law to end it in violence. Which they have a reputation for doing."
"Possible, I will keep it in mind. But to have those terrible murderers in a pact would be strange. And besides, now that they have a vendetta on us again, that will be very hard." Said the lord turning off the monitor.
"Permission to be excused sire." Said the commander,
"Permission granted." Said the lord as he turns the monitor back on and the commander walks out of the room.
Talon IV
The commander came in through the back of the ship. Walking in, she heard something.Two of her crew members whispering.
"When do i have to do this again?" Said the one man,
"Well," Said the other "It goes like this: Right when we see the raven backup ship come to escort us back to the clan territory, you kill her. Remember to do it right when she says that it's in range."
"Okay, simple enugh. What if she fires first?"
"She won't" He said with an evil look.
The bridge
On the bridge, the commander was ready. She kept her eye on that one. Lucky for her, she had a sidearm.
"We have made it into the sector." Said the one.
"Beak II in range" Said the commander. The one crew member started to pull out his sidearm, but it was too late. She pulled out her sidearm, and yet didn't kill him. The one telling him to kill her had shot him.
"I knew he was a spy right when he was premoted to our ship." Said the crew member.
"A premotion shall go to you too." She said "Anyone who saves my life in such a manner should be a General of your own ship."
After a short pause.
"Thank you commander" He said with an exited look.
Prolog:
Raven clan tower, a large black tower in the center of the raven clan territory. Many live around it and are completely safe to the Cobra clan, But not for long.
Talon IV.
"Um, commander?" Said the System operator on the Talon IV,
"What is it?" Said the Commander,
"We have a signal coming from the Cobra clan, they appear to be attacking."
"Can we stop them? How many are there?"
"Only 2" Said the system operator, "Oh no,"
"What now?"
"There are too many of them. Send for the fleet!"
"What’s the count?"
"60 and counting! 70, 80!"
"I am sending for the Fleet. Pull back now!" Said the commander as she taps a few buttons on her black keyboard.
Raven clan tower.
The commander rushing up the stairs finds the lord of raven sitting at his throne looking at his kingdom being destroyed.
"My liege, I have come to tell you that they have fended off the Cobra clan for now." Said the commander,
"Good" Said the Lord,
"This cannot continue. That clan has been at war with us for a very long time. Only just recently they made a truce. Although judging what just happened I suppose they are not trust worthy at all."
"Maybe we can make a pact." Said the commander,
"WHAT? Are you insane?"
"Insane is a relative word your majesty."
"True, true. But make a pact with the people who have killed our people for such a long time just because they want more land?"
"Completely destroying them would go against our law, if we made a pact, they would be breaking they're law to end it in violence. Which they have a reputation for doing."
"Possible, I will keep it in mind. But to have those terrible murderers in a pact would be strange. And besides, now that they have a vendetta on us again, that will be very hard." Said the lord turning off the monitor.
"Permission to be excused sire." Said the commander,
"Permission granted." Said the lord as he turns the monitor back on and the commander walks out of the room.
Talon IV
The commander came in through the back of the ship. Walking in, she heard something.Two of her crew members whispering.
"When do i have to do this again?" Said the one man,
"Well," Said the other "It goes like this: Right when we see the raven backup ship come to escort us back to the clan territory, you kill her. Remember to do it right when she says that it's in range."
"Okay, simple enugh. What if she fires first?"
"She won't" He said with an evil look.
The bridge
On the bridge, the commander was ready. She kept her eye on that one. Lucky for her, she had a sidearm.
"We have made it into the sector." Said the one.
"Beak II in range" Said the commander. The one crew member started to pull out his sidearm, but it was too late. She pulled out her sidearm, and yet didn't kill him. The one telling him to kill her had shot him.
"I knew he was a spy right when he was premoted to our ship." Said the crew member.
"A premotion shall go to you too." She said "Anyone who saves my life in such a manner should be a General of your own ship."
After a short pause.
"Thank you commander" He said with an exited look.