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Crow
Aug 25, 2009 21:29:01 GMT -5
Post by Danikaiju on Aug 25, 2009 21:29:01 GMT -5
Long long time ago I wrote this, well what seemed to me a long time, I thought I lost this one good thing I saved it
Her feathers are the color of black silt At her wake hopes wilt Her eyes are endless voids They are impossible to avoid She is a simple creature But do not underestimate her features Her nature is selfish and greedy and she eats what is left of the needy In her world there is no change Even if you are out of range remember when you see her woo she can see you too Crow
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LoneWolf
Warrior
Companions are a luxury I can't afford|--|Lime gr
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Crow
Aug 26, 2009 15:25:30 GMT -5
Post by LoneWolf on Aug 26, 2009 15:25:30 GMT -5
I like this one a lot. Its short, sweet, and to the point. You haven't yet produced a work of poetry i didn't like, Lacrymosa. Keep up the good work
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